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total 17 ------->85/ 119/ 85

(5
7
5) *5



first 5 : born simple, in a complex circumstance
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(5
7
5) *7


second 7 : creating complexities, and a confusion
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(5
7
5) *5


third 5 : loop, trying, simple answer
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Modern Haiku.

The history of the modern haiku dates from Masaoka Shiki's reform, begun in 1892, which established haiku as a new independent poetic form. Shiki's reform did not change two traditional elements of haiku: the division of 17 syllables into three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables and the inclusion of a seasonal theme.

Kawahigashi Hekigoto carried Shiki's reform further with two proposals:


Haiku would be truer to reality if there were no center of interest in it.
The importance of the poet's first impression, just as it was, of subjects taken from daily life, and of local colour to create freshness.
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* truer to reality
* subjects taken from daily life
* seasonal
* local colour to create freshness

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* explore the loop of
complexity / confusion // simplicity / centered answer

* Use of language

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what I want to express through this work:

honesty.
the cruel truth.
seeing the truth.
seeing oneself.
honest to oneself.
cruelty when one is being true/honest to oneself about oneself.

struggles after seeing one's deeper self.
embracing oneself just as who one is.


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what I have done so far:

being nervous. worrying.

playing with light (mostly sunlight) using:

a window curtain.
water bottle.
bracelet.
aloe gel.
ornament.


etc.

what I will try to do:

playing with shadows more.
using doors.
playing with lights that I have/I have borrowed.
film every scene I need.

the scenes___::

1. open up eyes / blinkinig
2. shadow
3. stange eye
4. light
5. shadow
6. trying to escape
7. wanting to catch 1
8. strange eye
9. light
10. light
11. light
12. trying to catch 2
13. shadow on the mirror
14. embracing / be free

-----------------------------------------I have the basic idea where I want to go and what I want to express
the hard part is the timing and how I film the images in my head into physical one.
also how I organize the images is hard (how I put them together).